Score: 10

"Simple math."

submission: Kitty Kitty dance

date: July 14, 2006

I'm giving you a five.

This is simply due to the fact that you obviously deserve a 3, but it's likely that some will blam your work, giving you 3 points less than what you deserve. In response to this, I will give you 2 points more than what you deserve.

:)

Also, I am sorry I could not give you that 1 lost point.

-Richard
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Score: 7

"Pretty Good."

submission: Sampson The Horse 2

date: July 10, 2006

Interesting use of cinematic music. Acting was above decent.

Perhaps next time you should get a better microphone. Also be sure to put a lot more work into pre-production. It's not very well written but it does follow an interesting movie-like pace.

After the symphonic music, the ending credits music seemed akward. Also, condidering the story is not over, there's not much point for such emotional music to begin with. Did you compress the music in the first place?

Overall, it's pretty good. Your Flash skills are good. Now you need to improve your writing/directing skills. Keep up the good work.

(BTW, perhaps you can contact me about an original soundtrack)

Score: 8

"Good message."

submission: Jeffrey Faden's BUS

date: April 28, 2006

I sat through this anticipating a punchline. Instead, I was given an interesting message. Overall, everything was nicely set up,(Animation, camera angles, backgrounds, mouth sync) however, the acting was rather mediocre. I liked the iPod reference. A similar situation haunted me earlier today. All should see this cartoon.

To end this review, I will state; "Fight overpopulation."

Score: 10

"Brilliant."

submission: Fairly OP Theme Backwards

date: April 23, 2006

I will simply state that these are very interesting to begin with. Make more.

Score: 10

"Beautiful"

submission: The People's Mario

date: April 17, 2006

That was a very lovely and fuckin' awesome piece of work. You successfully made Mario into your own bad ass character.

I didn't know from the start that it was suppose to depict communism. I started guessing after noticing the sky of red. Mario looked more like a Russian and he held that hammer with pride. I was expecting a sickle, but I guess that would not fit the Mario Bros touch. The music is great. You did a good job. Very nice, very powerful.

If you'd like, I can score your next project.
(Be sure to check out my communist website which I'll be sure not to link at the risk of being a douche ;) )