New Ending Why?
I am sorry for being a bastard. However, I decided to check out your composition as it was given the genre of "Indie" I was looking forward to the diversity and oddity I was expecting. Three seconds into listening, I found that this was not the case.
I do not see how this resembles the genre of "Indie" Sure, the piece starts out with a guitar (I could swear a guitar is more Western than any other instrument) playing a nice and simple intro of a bass note and another note 8 whole steps up. (Octave) My thoughts were "Fun. Maybe this is an 'Indie' piece performed by someone just trying to recreate some cool middle-eastern music. I was dissapointed to find that the scale was a major. (Not very Middle-Eastern or 'Indie' as you call it) Of course, when it comes to playing the guitar, scales can switch from minor to major in a heart beat.
Having found this composition is not really "Indie" (Unless "Indie" is a new phrase to describe emo music) I decided to hear what the song did have to offer. Rather than critique the actual composition (It's a decent song in whole) I will state that the artist performs this as a live recording. Such a recording does not seem very useful for such a place like the Audio Portal considering this place is meant to house music for people to use for their Flash projects. (As far as I know)
Please better from my critique. I do not mean to be a douche. And Thank you for not posting bad techno or some sort of videogame ripoff piece. Keep working, Lt. Black Shadow. Good luck with future compositions.
